New Work... please comment!
Posted 11 October 2004 - 02:48 AM
looking for feedback on my latest spot.
This was created for Rich's Macy's corporate for a new online community for their internal. Looking for feedback on overall design, and animation.
Posted 11 October 2004 - 04:32 AM
Posted 11 October 2004 - 07:54 AM
great colours, cool motion on the text, nice characters and character animation. great music/pacing.
If I had to crit all i can come up with is that it could maybe benefit from a voiceover. (maybe something along the lines of the voice on the new honda diesel engine ad) reading what the text says. Just a thought.
Great tho, well done bet your clients chuffed.
Posted 11 October 2004 - 02:57 PM
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