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mjoshua

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  1. Well, ZeBrownie, this isn't really on-subject with the site at large. But I don't mind. Dream Interpretation is one of my favorite spiritual gifts. I love how Adonai truly interprets our dreams. But maybe I can help a little:

     

    Are you trying to get away from some sick stress and betrayal? Is a trusted coworker/client trying to take advantage of you or simply exploit you? If so, you need a trusted third-party who can bring some serious insight into the situation and confront the person that's giving you the hard time.


  2. I thought all your links didn't work, but then I realized they were just slow to load. Maybe resave your quicktimes to stream instead of load all the way before playing?

     

    About your reel, the thing that stands out the most is your use of sexual elements. This sparks the classic debate over when the use of sex in professional work is appropriate. In any case, my opinion is that it distracts one's process of thought from your design and edits.


  3. That's chill.

     

    It reminds me of much of my earlier work. I get that the MGs help you get the feel of a chill little night club. But do they add much past a "cool factor"? Remember that you're a storyteller. What story are we to walk away with?


  4. Ben,

     

    Great work. Makes me want to brush up on my Hebrew. The only thing I noticed is that it felt a little long. I wouldn't suggest showing all the work faster, but maybe only show the best techniques one time instead of showing similar techniques in different projects?


  5. Brilliant juxt. Interesting visuals. It hooked me. The song is perfectly invasive and serves to amplify your work and the timing edits.

     

    If you cut it down at all, I'd suggest cutting the stuff between about 00:52 and 1:10. Those pieces aren't as strong as your others. Plus, it amplifies the aforementioned juxtaposition.

     

    And yeah, just make http://v2.outermotion.com/?p=9 your landing page and make all your work descend down the page. Less work for your audience and they only have to hit play on your videos. Everything they need is right there.

     

    People want to see your motion work. Your web skill gets in the way right now.


  6. Brilliant juxt. Interesting visuals. It hooked me. The song is perfectly invasive and serves to amplify your work and the timing edits.

     

    If you cut it down at all, I'd suggest cutting the stuff between about 00:52 and 1:10. Those pieces aren't as strong as your others. Plus, it amplifies the aforementioned juxtaposition.

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