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**Feedback**Graduation Reel

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Hello people from mograph,

 

I recently posted my rough reel couple weeks ago. Here is a new cut and new music. I am graduating from art institute of Pittsburgh and I only have a couple weeks left. Please give me feedback. Thank you everyone

 

BTang_Rough Reel

sound designed by: Combustion

 

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Here is my other cut. I put more of the good pieces in the beginning. The sound design is little off so just critique the edit.

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Commented over on the vimeo page. Some nice work in there.

 

Hello people from mograph,

 

I recently posted my rough reel couple weeks ago. Here is a new cut and new music. I am graduating from art institute of Pittsburgh and I only have a couple weeks left. Please give me feedback. Thank you everyone

 

BTang_Rough Reel

sound designed by: Combustion

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Some good stuff in here. Needs a stronger edit. Cut clips during dramatic movement--too many clips start still or slow. I would also re-order some of the clips, and put the better and more narrative pieces towards the front (e.g. the TV head), while pushing the abstract and weaker clips towards the end.

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