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Magnus Atom Motion Reel 2010

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Hi Magnus,

 

I think your reel needs a lot more work before you release it into the wild again. There's some good stuff on there, but the length of the reel and relative lack of work means that two minutes feels like 20...

 

My suggestion - cut it down by at least a minute and try to get a couple of new projects on there.

 

Dan

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You're showing talent with the illustration, but the pacing of the reel is what you really need to pay attention too. In fact, the pacing of the animation needs a lot of work. I'd say this looks like a good start. Take a look at Nick Campbell's Reel Critiques to get a better idea of what should be in your reel.

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Hey everybody I really appreciate the great feedback. I'll definitely check out Nick Campbell's reel critiques. I had actually made this a few months ago and since then I've made a few new pieces. So I will start on a new reel asap.

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