Guest MBX Report post Posted January 10, 2005 (edited) ***removed from server*** Edited November 14, 2005 by MBX Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Sao_Bento Report post Posted January 10, 2005 Cool man, I never would have guessed XSI. So this was just something you were doing on your own, or for a gig? trivia: "Mato" means "bear" in Dakota. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Resbot Report post Posted January 11, 2005 It's great, i really like it. Seems like something you could just continue expanding on and building up, but I guess you gotta stop somewhere. And frankly I appreciate posts like this, one thing I wish was kicked around this board more often is personal inspiration and it's products. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest paccollective Report post Posted January 11, 2005 nice. originality at it's best. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest headbox Report post Posted January 11, 2005 I dig the negative space Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest yogert909 Report post Posted January 11, 2005 I love it too. Best thing I've seen in a while. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest jj Report post Posted January 11, 2005 Some really nice work, but I'd polish the design a bit more. The opening feels a little too chaotic and cluttered - maybe too many randomly rotated buildings. Too much white space in one segment. Cool drawings. Thanks for showing, and please show more. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest yogert909 Report post Posted January 11, 2005 I like all of those things. If I had to critique, I'd say the end seems to taper off a bit, too slow towards the end, and the camera travels in a straight line for too long. but even that stuff I don't mind. It reminds me a little of the dada collagest hanna hock. maybe because it's black and white. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest SermonOfMockery Report post Posted January 11, 2005 yeah, nice stuff. i agree that it's not original at all, but as i've said a million times before, originality is overrated. also, like jj said, the pacing of the ending isn't consistent with the beginning- the opening is very busy, but then the last half doesn't have much going on. anyway, good work, keep posting your stuff! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest SermonOfMockery Report post Posted January 11, 2005 that's my shit, but as i have said before i don't think my stuff is that great. i have a lot of new stuff that i'll post soon when i'm done with this project. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
