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Hey guys, just looking for some hardcore critiques from you all. I posted a while ago and now just put together a newish reel of personal stuff from the past few months.

Trying to get better so be brutal.

Thanks.

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I would add more action into it. But everything is fine with you, looks like you have right fundamentals and now all what you have to do is to work hard to raise your skills and knowledge.

 

good luck mate!

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The "Luciole" clip is hard to read. The next clip is too dark…I can see the music notes against the sunset, but I can't really get a sense of what else is going on in the silhouetted area. Maybe you could add some contrast so that the figures stand out a little more from the background. Your music seems to abruptly end. If you tweak that with a fade our some sort of sound effect or something I think that your reel would feel more complete.

 

Keep it up:)

Edited by Trione

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