Renato Rena 0 Report post Posted March 24, 2011 one of my motion labs open head: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
killkillakillyo 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 one of my motion labs open head: http://www.vimeo.com/21423299 i like the concept and treatment. but it's lacking in a lot of areas. add some dimension to it (the third one) and don't be afraid to play with perspective. maybe map the drawing onto a cylinder and build the arrows in 3d. then have the camera fly into the head as the arrows fly out leading to your name. typically these things develop as you build it and have that "aha!" moment. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Renato Rena 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 i like the concept and treatment. but it's lacking in a lot of areas. add some dimension to it (the third one) and don't be afraid to play with perspective. maybe map the drawing onto a cylinder and build the arrows in 3d. then have the camera fly into the head as the arrows fly out leading to your name. typically these things develop as you build it and have that "aha!" moment. hi! thanks for the comment! can be really a good way to solve it and make it more rich and beautiful. thanks! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daveglanz 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 The most important thing you need to add here is some motion to the face - it'll give it a lot more life. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites