j.boyd919 0 Report post Posted June 16, 2013 Here is my recently completed MoGraph Showreel. I could really use some criticism from some fresh eyes! Let me have it!! https://vimeo.com/68400958 Thanks for watching! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
j.boyd919 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2013 Come on guys! 80 people clicked this link and nothing to say?!? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jarbrain 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2013 Hey Josh, I'll reply to your topic and give my criticism and feedback to your showreel. To start off, the content of work looks really good but I feel that the execution in the showreel isn't up to scratch. I understand the concept with the intro with logo and black background and comes to life with colour with the music but I were losing interest by this point. The slow-mo effect of different shapes leaving the logo was a little to long; I would suggest start editing in different projects by this point. The Warrior section was a little fast and unable to take in what I am looking at, etc. The Sunsports holds a second to long. Finally, the outro I would say on white background instead of white as it's easier to read text on black on white then white on black. Hope this helps you out, +Z Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
