Agris 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2013 Hi, all. I recently discovered this forum and saw many nice works here, so I decided to throw my reel here. I started doing this thing 5 years ago (whyle studying computer science at Uni ) , and it's my first reel. As i have progressed a lot, it consists mostly of my last years works. any critique appreciated Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RVA8 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2013 I like your work! There's some really cool stuff in there. I think the music you have chosen doesn't do it any justice though. It starts off really strong and seems like it's going to build somewhere nice after that Gacho piece, but it just never does. It stays rather flat the whole time. The sound design works to help retain some of that energy for sure, but I just found myself waiting for the down-beat that never comes. It also cuts off rather abruptly at the end. R Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jarbrain 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2013 I loved the intro part on the beach, it made me laugh! However, I'm not sure about the outro as it was flat and boring with white text on black background. Would have been better to arch back to the beach with more elements attacking each other then fade to black with contact details. Cheers, +Z Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
