Titles for Short Movie

[PiotrWeiss 0]

Hi,
I'm new here.
I have some years experience in FX for movies but motion design is a bit new for me but fun

Together with some friends we're doing short movie called Omni Girl.
We are releaseing teaser soon, and... I have to make Titles for a teaser.

This is what I have now, and I need advice of people who have experience and are better than me inthis.
We want titles to match aestetics of short movie (ofcourse).
Here a bit more to check aestetics:

Instagram Link

And here is the Titles. I need this to look good, and I;m looking at this fr a while.
I already know that text 'Girl' is not visible to much, and need to change camera animation.

Here is link for Titles

Thanks in advance.