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#1 Guest_Tread_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 02:48 AM

Hey all,

looking for feedback on my latest spot.


This was created for Rich's Macy's corporate for a new online community for their internal. Looking for feedback on overall design, and animation.



#2 Guest_fredcamino_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 04:32 AM

i love it ted. you're skills go to the next level with each new project. you've really injected a lot of "life" into the motion of this piece.

#3 Guest_pokeitwithastick_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 07:54 AM

Thats brilliant,

great colours, cool motion on the text, nice characters and character animation. great music/pacing.

If I had to crit all i can come up with is that it could maybe benefit from a voiceover. (maybe something along the lines of the voice on the new honda diesel engine ad) reading what the text says. Just a thought.

Great tho, well done bet your clients chuffed.

#4 Guest_soulmobile_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 02:57 PM

Yes it works very well! Simple and funny!

#5 Guest_I can't draw_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 09:08 PM

I like the piece, but I think those characters look a lot like the zoloft guy.


Am I the only one who thinks that?

#6 Guest_Tread_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 09:19 PM

you are right. I agree with you because it was a bit intentional. The client said, "we want something like the zoloft guy." I tried to make ours a little different and thought I did a good job. The zoloft dude is a little more flat. And of course, depressed... ha



#7 Guest_dlogic_*

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Posted 11 October 2004 - 09:51 PM

I'm not sure if your brief specified the length of the piece, but it seems a little to long for me (or maybe listening to that music for such a duration makes me drowsy :lol: ). Other than that, nice work !

dlogic 8)

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