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my first cinema 4D video feedback welcome!

#1 User is offline   winkelmm Icon

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Posted 21 April 2009 - 02:03 PM

Hey all,

I'm fairly new to Cinema 4D and have just completed my first short film. I've only been working with C4D for about a year, so I've definitely got quite a bit more to learn.

http://www.vimeo.com/4240369

Any feedback on it would be very much appreciated!

Thanks,
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 02:17 PM

Dude, nice. This is your first C4D animation? You must have prior experience in other 3D apps though right?

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Posted 21 April 2009 - 02:23 PM

That was really well done. Nice work!
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 03:16 PM

amazing, please tell me that wasn't your first 3D animation period? loads of character in the flow of things, very cool
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 04:18 PM

Looks good. Im going to assume you've been doing animation (maybe not 3d ) for a while now. Love the almost stop motion feel, what was this project for, personal?
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 04:33 PM

Love it man. Very nicely shaded/animated and really dig the music/sfx. Going to make me check out C4D now...

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Posted 21 April 2009 - 05:58 PM

Yeah, man. dope!

Looks like a fun project to build, and it is charming to watch. You've done a lot with a little, and have worked the overall gestalt well to really sharpen and embed the overall character of the piece.

Well done!
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 07:01 PM

I'm blown away. Excellent work.
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Posted 21 April 2009 - 11:26 PM

Exemplary work, well done. This was on the Vimeo's homepage today in the "we like" section when I logged in earlier.
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Posted 22 April 2009 - 12:39 AM

View Postbeau+++, on Apr 21 2009, 10:17 AM, said:

Dude, nice. This is your first C4D animation? You must have prior experience in other 3D apps though right?

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LOL. Yeah, me too.
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Posted 22 April 2009 - 01:07 AM

as has been said already ... nice stuff!
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Posted 22 April 2009 - 01:33 AM

Nice. I love the 3D cartoon look.
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Posted 23 April 2009 - 03:06 PM

Superb - saw this on motionographer.
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Posted 23 April 2009 - 04:15 PM

wow. Really tight. Love the attention to detail.

proving that a few elements work beautifully if they serve a good story and establish a mood.
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Posted 28 May 2009 - 10:53 PM

If there was an emoticon for a jaw-drop smiley, I would [insert it here]. Ambient Occlusion and GI? I haven't seen your reply as to whether or not you have 3d experience, but regardless, this is a beautiful piece.
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Posted 01 June 2009 - 09:16 AM

Hi winkelmm,

Actually, salsa dancing has a very exciting history, as well. It has evolved from the rumba dance as well as traditional Cuban dance during 1950’s. And at the end of the communist revolution has prompt and gave birth to the traditional dances. Many of the dances from this country are similar which has started from the same places. But no matter what, though, no one can deny that salsa dance and other traditional Cuban dances are essential to the Cuban culture. If you are determined to learn dance salsa, there is no substitute for the actual visit in Cuba. Here, you can visit the Havana clubs and at the same time learning many of the salsa dancing techniques.
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Posted 07 July 2009 - 10:06 AM

superb I love the cartoon.

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Posted 31 July 2009 - 07:49 AM

I love cartoon too

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Posted 31 July 2009 - 09:33 AM

I missed this, very very nice. Cheers for bumping this mr spammer ^
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Posted 17 August 2009 - 12:49 AM

I'm unable to belive this is this guy frist 3d animation....WOW
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