New site, new reel
#1
Posted 24 November 2011 - 04:43 PM
With a new site also comes a new reel, which I'd also like to get some feedback on. I'm not as sure of the edit as I was with my last reel, and it came out shorter than just about every other reel I've seen. Even with it so short, though, I'm worried that I dwell too long on individual projects. Maybe I've just watched it too many times.
#2
Posted 24 November 2011 - 06:43 PM



#3
Posted 24 November 2011 - 07:03 PM
Also, do you know why you have a giant DivX logo on the site? Chrome should be handling the video, not any third-party plugin... might be related to the issue.
If you have a minute, could you open the JavaScript console, reload the site, and let me know what it says?
Edited by Aaron Scott, 24 November 2011 - 07:08 PM.
#4
Posted 24 November 2011 - 09:53 PM
When it comes to the site I think it looks wonderful. I am a big fan of the full browser imagery that we are seeing more of now and I think the overall feel projects a very professional and competent image or you and your skillsets. The only comment I have would be to add some variety to the background imagery. I sat and watched it all the way through and when I went to check out the reel it was a bit of a let down to see the exact same thing but with sound. It felt a bit repetitive. I wouldn't change much just something along the lines of changing the sequence and possibly pushing the images to black and white. That way when you go to view the reel it is familiar imagery but not the exact same thing you were just viewing.
When it comes to the reel I enjoyed it and felt that it was short and sweet. There is one shot I would drop though, the first shot of Wolverine running towards the camera. The illustration is a bit off and every time I see it I cant help but thing it looks wrong. When working with imagery that is so iconic it has to be perfect or it just wont feel right. The other Marvel shots didnt bother me it is just that first one. I would also end the reel on the shot of the man getting shot in the head. It is a very powerful image and goes great to the music. The ending shot just feels a bit out of place after that.
#5
Posted 24 November 2011 - 10:11 PM
There is one shot I would drop though, the first shot of Wolverine running towards the camera. The illustration is a bit off and every time I see it I cant help but thing it looks wrong. When working with imagery that is so iconic it has to be perfect or it just wont feel right. The other Marvel shots didnt bother me it is just that first one. I would also end the reel on the shot of the man getting shot in the head. It is a very powerful image and goes great to the music. The ending shot just feels a bit out of place after that.
Thanks -- it's nice to finally get another set of eyes on it. I think you're right -- I'll tweak the edit when I have some time.
#6
Posted 25 November 2011 - 11:50 PM
Upon site load, we're presented with a slightly low quality non-audio version of your reel. So really, we just sit there and watch it. With no sound. At low quality. What's the point of having a nicer version with sound and all of that? You've already blown your wad. So the background video should be considerably different from the reel. Maybe it's a series of super slowed-down shots selected from your work, perhaps in b/w, or whatever. But don't give us everything you have unless you want to add audio and do it like a gigantic reel.
Also, it doesn't seem necessary to make us click on "motion" or "interactive". We've already come to your site to see your work, so just show it to us. Your whole site could just be the one page with your name, the background video, and the full project list on top of that. Fewer clicks is fewer roadblocks.
#8
Posted 02 December 2011 - 07:20 PM

Viewing on Chome 15.0.874.121 on Snow Leopard
On a better note, I like the re-cut of the reel a great deal. Everything flowed together nicely and was short and sweet leaving me wanting more.
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