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#1 JamesDohertyEsq

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 01:15 PM

Hey hey,

This is from a little while back but I never got to post up here and get feedback on it until now..

Plenty of things that I'm not happy with myself but that's what pushes me to work hard and be better, what I want to know is what you guys think are it's weaknesses, in case there are any that I'm missing.

Appreciate any input,

Cheers!

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#2 thekinginyellow

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 03:39 PM

not bad. your intro and outro combined is like half of the reel which is awkward to me.

i checked out your page and now all i can think about it richard ayoade and how jealous i am that you got to work with him.

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Posted 18 January 2012 - 09:56 AM

Ha, yeah it was only for a brief amount of time really, he kinda just called in and checked that it was going in the right direction a few times.

Yeah the reel was originally much longer and it made sense for the longer intro then, edited it way down and it is a bit ridiculous. just haven't had time to re-make it.. It's first on my list next time I have a day where I'm not booked. Thanks for the feedback mate
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Posted 18 January 2012 - 02:48 PM

I think it's good. But I agree that for this reel intro is quite long. Also I was expecting to see more 2d design works after your intro. But I like your editing style in this reel.

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Posted 19 January 2012 - 03:15 PM

What IS that music?! Rubbish.

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Posted 19 January 2012 - 07:08 PM

i think i've heard of it before. something about stepping on dubs. idk. it burns my ears.

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Posted 20 January 2012 - 04:08 AM

The only thing that matters is that you worked on the kill list dvd menu. That movie is so crazy!

But yes nice reel : )

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 12:34 PM

Hmmmm. I replied to this lat week but it appears to have not come through..

What I said was something like:

Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated! Yeah I've done more 2d work but as I'm kinda looking to move into 3d more I've kept the focus on that, think it all needs more polish but these were some of my first 3d projects so i'm sure that will come with time and practice.

The track is Spitfire by Porter Robinson

Yeah kill list is a bit mental, think they should have explained it more though, easy to have mysterious goings on if you never have to explain them!
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