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#1 chepetusa

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 02:15 PM

Hey there i see a lot, of reels, thats the reason of the name, i wanted to share our work in Guatemala, hope to hear critics and feedback.

Cheers.


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#2 chepetusa

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 02:17 PM

does any one know how to embed?

#3 oeuf

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 03:31 PM


There ya go.

Good stuff man. If i had to critique, i'd say you have some weird edit cuts in there. Some things I wanted to see more of and others I felt I saw too much of. I see that it's edited to cues in the audio, but you should take a look where some things could go longer or shorter.

Edited by oeuf, 13 March 2012 - 03:37 PM.


#4 chepetusa

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 04:25 PM

Hey thank you very much oeuf, thanks for your comments also!.

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#5 nusferatu

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 04:35 PM

nice reel!
I didn't like much the intro, the character animation takes to long.....but beside that it was awsome

#6 este.eri

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 11:32 PM

Cool man. I like Guatemala. I am from Nicaragua, but now I work in Atlanta in the USA. Good reel. Lot's of stuff. I think the intro is too long but it's the best part. I would kill the spheres and noise spheres ... that stuff is feeling very greyscale gorilla to me.

#7 chepetusa

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 12:27 AM

Muchas gracias este.eri :D

you right with the speheres, thanks for your comments!

#8 Cosmo Ray

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 05:36 AM

With regards to the character animation in the beginning, it's always a good idea to watch your reel without sound, as that is how many (most) people will be watching it. It's good to express a sense of pacing by editing to the music, but you can't be reliant on it.

#9 chepetusa

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 05:00 AM

thanks for the great advice Cosmo Ray :)

#10 mintyfresh

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 08:41 AM

nice work, i like your AE work as well as your 3D stuff, nice to see. the little 2D characters at the beginning are rad man

i love guatemala also, beautiful country and i swear some of the nicest people in the world. are you in the capital or antigua, and you didnt happen to be at that first metallica concert ever in guate a couple of yrs ago? that was awesome, i wish i had a decent camera phone, would have been a great short film i was thinking as i got super drunk and full on street beers and street tacos on that road leading the stadium. i had to mention that, one of the best memories of my life

cheers man

#11 chepetusa

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Posted 15 March 2012 - 09:04 PM

Hello mintyfresh, glad to hear you like Guatemala and our reel!, nice story you got here.
Cheers.




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