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#1 dortizdesigns

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 05:16 AM

Hey Guys, here is my new 2012reel... please leave some feedback if any otherwise thanks for watching..



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#2 Brandon S.

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Posted 15 May 2012 - 06:28 AM

Yo - I'm just kind of going through the reels here and thought I would give my two cents since no one has yet.

Overall good editing and flow. I like your intro. All animation looks nice. The only part where I rolled my eyes was the pink glowing spheres. Not that its bad, just over done.

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Posted 15 May 2012 - 01:50 PM

yeh, good stuff....lose the balls. it screams greyscalegorilla.

#4 dan_hin

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Posted 15 May 2012 - 04:23 PM

+10 points for the music. Lose the balls and you've got a tight reel.

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 09:42 PM

The music is definitely a sick selection. I think your reel overall could benefit from at least a few timed cuts with the beat, but, it's still paced well as is.

#6 dortizdesigns

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Posted 04 June 2012 - 11:23 PM

Thanks for the feedback!

I do agree with the comments all of you made on the balls.... It was a filler spot, been kind of lazy to replace it but now that all of you mentioned it I need to now!!
and yes I love this track, the first time i heard it I knew it would fit well for a reel.
thanks again!

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#7 ShannonDS

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Posted 05 June 2012 - 12:45 AM

Awesome reel man, really love the flow and edit. Not really feeling the glow balls piece, but everythin else is solid. Great work man!




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