Awesome feedback! Thank you! I agree with the music and was playing with the intro quite a bit to get it to work, so maybe I will take your suggestion and just cut in where the beat starts instead.
I was on the fence in adding the time-lapse software piece and that's a good suggestion to remove it. The XTERRA piece with the swimmer/biker/runner is my strongest piece (I feel) so getting it up closer to the front is probably important.
I really appreciate you taking the time to give constructive feedback. Thanks!