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neat use of parallax.

 

I really like the final resolve of the logo too.

 

Great work! Is this playing regionally or across the country? I'll look for it next time that I'm in the movies!!

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I know it will come across as harsh, but the paralax thing didn't work out so great - in the fiirst shot it looks more like some kind of spherical distorition rather than 3d, in the second the head of the bed slides against the wall - since it's on the same plane as the wall (aproximately) is shouldn't move in relation to it at all - the thrid one looks kind of allright. I think it works best in the fourth scene. While to logo resolves are basic they are ok, however I must say I don't quite understand the jump from sky blue to black back to blue - it'd try to keep the background similar. The text in scenes 1&2 comes in to late and stays for too short in my opinion + the one in scene 1 is barely visible.

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The endplate is very nice!

 

The parallax didn't work out so well but it wasn't horrible, so don't take our comments too seriously. In addition to what Zmurowski said, I think the parallax scenes could've benefited from some improved lighting, depth of field, and the way in which you spaced out your images. For example, I think the family and couch should be at the same z-space at that angle, because the dad's hand is resting on the pillow, right? If your camera were closer in to the family, then maybe I'd space the objects out a bit to make it more cinematic, but when you're that wide you can see everything and it starts to look fake I think. Hope I've been helpful!

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